Very important

Yo peeps, i have started rigging the target again and i am using the method that we tried yesturday for the joint so there will be a nice bend in the shoulder. I am at the stage of placing the joint in the right place and all i need is your approval of wether it looks good. If it does ill leave the joint there if it does not then ill have to move it around somewhere. Pictures are below one low poly and the other smooth. If you guys are able to send feedback asap that would be great as im doing the rig now